1. The first essay was good, easy to read and straight forward. Nothing was too off topic.
2. The second one has a lot of good facts about the authors life and ties them into their topic which allows for the reader to have good background info.
3. The last essay i enjoyed the topic of the paper, it was something that kept me reading. I like that he used current events and recognizable names and quotes. Low lights:
1. The first one seemed like she didn't give enough of her position, but just packed the paper with research ABOUT her position.
2. Although using big portions of an autobiography, it sometimes bogs down the paper with facts that aren't important.
3. The last essay, while interesting to me personally, was a bit casual in regards to referencing gossip in Hollywood. It could have been a bit more professional and used more appropriate language.
3. The last essay, while interesting to me personally, was a bit casual in regards to referencing gossip in Hollywood. It could have been a bit more professional and used more appropriate language.
Overall, i think i can uses these samples to guide me in the right direction in regards to structure of my position paper. It helps to know where to place quotes and how to build a paragraph around it.
I agree that these essays were great example as to how to write a position paper. Hwever there was only one thing that confused me in class and that was the endnotes that we really dont need.
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